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Postby Brig. Gen. Ayden Hyrule » Thu Nov 30, '06 - 2:28 pm

EvilVillain wrote:From high above on rooftops
I hear all of the crys
I swoop down like an angel
To save teary eyes
My red horns make them run
My adversary weighs a ton
But blind justice is much more than my disguise.


How is that one?

This one makes me think of daredevil for some odd reason...which may I add was a HORRIBLE MOVIE! :x
Basterd, you betrayed us.
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Postby EvilVillain » Thu Nov 30, '06 - 2:54 pm

Daredevil is correct. The character is fantastic, but sadly, yes, the movie blew chunks. But I still love the character.
Ideas, in general, are just a bad idea!

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Postby Rendallion » Fri Dec 01, '06 - 9:29 am

The movie was SO AWEFUL!
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Postby Habicious » Mon Apr 09, '07 - 9:59 pm

i'll tell ya what movie deserves more respect than it gets...and thats elektra!
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